jueves, 12 de noviembre de 2009

Formal Transactional Letter!


Dear Sir or Madam,

I`am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your article. I read it very carefully and I think you have many mistakes about the article, you have a wrong information.

First, your advertisement mentions The protesters, claim not only about the extinction of a rare species of nail also all the destruction of woodland.


In addition to this, an estimated the people that gathered were about 2.000 not 200 this is a big consequence for the rest of people.
Moreover, you said that the protesters sat in the road and chanted slogans, but this was a silent demonstration.

Finally, you said that the ""troublemakers" were all unemployed youngsters, but you again commited other mistake, because they are local residents.


In conclusion, I hope this big mistake not happen in the future.

I would be pleased to receive a report. Thank you in advance for you assistance. Iam looking forward to receiving your reply.


Yours Faithfully,


Ayleen Hernández

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